The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls In the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls In the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart compares the total number of minutes ( in billions) between 3 types of telephone calls in the UK from 1995 to 2002.

The most dominant category of this period is local – fixed line, the data indicates the growth and decrease throughout 7 years. There were about 70 minutes ( in billion ) phone calls made by local – fixed line and this number continued increasing sharply annually to 90 minutes ( in billion) in 1999. Proximately, the amount of telephone calls tended to decline slowly and returned to the beginning point at 70 minutes ( in billion) in 2002.

The two other categories ( national and international – fixed line and mobiles ( all calls) ) had monotonous intensification along this period. The quantity of minutes ( in billion) of national and international – fixed line telephone calls fluctuated and rose minimally from nearly 40 minutes ( in billion) in 1995 to about 60 minutes ( in billion ) after 7 years. In the other hand, The number of minutes ( in billion) of mobiles ( all calls) showed significant rising, they started with the lowest number by 3 minutes and almost remained the stable under 10 minutes until 1999. mobiles ( all calls ) telephone call increased surprisingly to 45 minutes ( in billion) in 2002 and became a potential category.

In brief, the number of minutes ( in billion) made of local – fixed line remained the same through this period, whereas, national and international – fixed line and mobiles ( all calls) grew fast after 7 years.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62975551758 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454918032787 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
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Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 1.69756097561 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263104703706 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148690786871 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113028991281 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215978068539 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124408623765 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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