The bar chart compares twelve countries in terms
of the overall number of medals that they have
won at the Olympic Games.
It is clear that the USA is by far the most
successful Olympic medal winning nation. It is
also noticeable that the figures for gold, silver
and bronze medals won by any particular country
tend to be fairly similar.
The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic
medals, including approximately 900 gold
medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. In second
place on the all-time medals chart is the Soviet
Union, with just over 1,000 medals. Again, the
number of gold medals won by this country is
slightly higher than the number of silver or bronze
medals.
Only four other countries - the UK, France,
Germany and Italy - have won more than 500
Olympic medals, all with similar proportions of
each medal colour. Apart from the USA and the
Soviet Union, China is the only other country with
a noticeably higher proportion of gold medals
(about 200) compared to silver and bronze (about
100 each).
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views and 56
- Some people think that large impressive buildings are important for a city Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 53
- The graph below shows Long Term International Migration in UK 1999 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The line graph shows the number of players in four different sports badminton tennis basketball rugby in a particular European country between 1985 and 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where 73
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisolls where relevant Write at least 150 words
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23221936272 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570621468927 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2358405899 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 3.83414634146 574% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333783301804 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161155167441 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952948543227 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972600266613 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957571517693 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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