The bar chart shows the total value of exported products from various categories of a specific nation in 2015 and 2016 while the table indicates growth rates of mentioned categories in 2015 compared with the figures in 2016. Overall, Petroleum products and Engineered goods are the major exported products while textiles showed the least value. In the table, Textiles had the highest growth rate and the gem and jewellery category experienced a downward trend.
Having looked at the bar chart for more details, it is clear that the value of petroleum products was the highest, accounted for approximately 60 billion dollar in 2015 and 2016. Engineered goods saw a similar pattern, when its total value in 2015 and 2016 were under and over 60 billion dollars respectively. Ranking third was gems and jewellery products, its figures were less than petroleum products’ value around 20 billion dollars, taking up rpughly 40 billion dollars anually. The value of agricuture and textiles exports were the least. While agriculture products’ figures remained stable at 30 billion dollars in 2 years, the figures for textiles witnessed a dramatic rise from arounf 25 billion dollars to over 30 billion dollars.
focusing on the rest data given, it is apparent that textiles category had the highest development potential, rising approximately 15.24 percent compared with the 2015’s data. the growth rates of petroleum and engineered exports were 8.5 percent and 3 percent respectively. Notably, agricultural products growth rate was trivial, remaning under 1 [percent.](http://percent.in) In contrast, there was a slight decrease of 5 percent in the sum value of gem and jewellery category in 2016.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Focusing
... dollars to over 30 billion dollars. focusing on the rest data given, it is apparent ...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'textiles'' or 'textile's'?
Suggestion: textiles'; textile's
...he rest data given, it is apparent that textiles category had the highest development po...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... percent compared with the 2015’s data. the growth rates of petroleum and engineere...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...ent respectively. Notably, agricultural products growth rate was trivial, remaning under...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, third, well, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3670411985 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02775112236 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501872659176 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.342620673 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272349376544 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120905744538 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135177330101 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21463481548 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128976415553 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Focusing
... dollars to over 30 billion dollars. focusing on the rest data given, it is apparent ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'textiles'' or 'textile's'?
Suggestion: textiles'; textile's
...he rest data given, it is apparent that textiles category had the highest development po...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... percent compared with the 2015’s data. the growth rates of petroleum and engineere...
^^^
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...ent respectively. Notably, agricultural products growth rate was trivial, remaning under...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, third, well, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3670411985 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02775112236 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501872659176 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.342620673 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272349376544 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120905744538 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135177330101 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21463481548 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128976415553 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.