The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph demonstrates the value of exporting goods divided by categories during 2015 and 2016. The changes in value of each are depicted in percentages in the followed table.
In 2016, most of the values of exports increased considerably which could be evidently seen in textiles as the bar grew rapidly from 25 billion to a bit over 30 billion reaching the highest growth with 15.24%. Furthermore, the engineered products also rose 8.5% from approximately 55 billion to over 60 billion.
On the other side, there was a slight decline in gems and jewelry which dropper from 45 to about 40 billion with 5.18% falling.
From the overall perspective, there was a significantly growing income during 2015 and 2016 where textiles reached the highest growth among the other categories. However, the value of gems and jewelry decreased.
- The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 78
- The chart shows the percentage of males and females in Australia who were overweight from 1980 to 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
- The bar chart shows the amount spent on digital games in the USA and China from 2010 to 2017 and the pie chart shows global spending on these games in 2017 78
- The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use To what ex 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15942028986 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76610443646 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4871659305 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206454656818 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105233316944 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102247010462 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139361854353 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127732591193 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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