The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following chart illustrates how many billions dollar of miscellaneous categories of products were exported by a specific country within 2015 and 2016, with the table depicting the comparison of these categories based on percentage change in values at the same period.
As can be clearly observed from the chart, the exports categories can be divided into two distinctive groups. The first group consists of Gems and jewelry which it experienced a dramatic decrease from above 40 billion dollars to under 40 billion dollars during 2015 and 2016.
However, Petroleum products, engineered goods, Agricultural products, and Textiles are placed in the second group. There categories witnessed a drastic or slight climb during 2015 and 2106. Despite Agricultural products which increased gradually around 30 billion dollars, other three categories went up sharply in 2016 in comparison with 2015.
It is clear from the table that unlike Gems and jewelry which observed a remarkable decline during 2015 and 2016 by around 5.18%, there were either a gradual rise, like in Agricultural products by 0.18%, or a sharp rise in other three categories, Petroleum products, engineered goods, and Textiles, 3%, 8.5%, and 15.24%, respectively.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'billions'' or 'billion's'?
Suggestion: billions'; billion's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46073298429 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82360637127 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2711000158 43.030603864 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.0 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283980124741 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132730363411 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960330197684 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181835987299 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921865130354 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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