The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of destination of Anthropology graduates from on university in six distinct groups while the table gives some information about the salaries of these graduates based on type of employment after 5 years.
In general majority of graduated get full-time work and fewer of them select part-time work and postgrad study at the same time. freelance consults have the minimum salaries among other groups and government sector give max salaries to their employees.
As can be seen, students after that completed their study choose full-time work that include 52% of society. The applicant for part-time work decreased significantly about 37% which located in second place. Unfortunately, the percentage of unemployed is more than three remain groups by 12%. Other remained three groups no longer significant.
Whereas salaries of anthropology graduates increased slightly in each three types of employment but in freelance don’t change after a raise sharply in 75000-99999$. The best type of employment is government sector that slight increased and has maximum percent by 50% among all other groups. Private groups have a fluctuate situation and after a surge about 25% decrease again and in 100000$ has 30%.
As a result, the information shows that private companies have lowers salaries and full-time work are popular among graduated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Freelance
...rk and postgrad study at the same time. freelance consults have the minimum salaries amon...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g all other groups. Private groups have a fluctuate situation and after a surge about 25% d...
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Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...a surge about 25% decrease again and in 100000$ has 30%. As a result, the information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47417840376 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86317239738 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9629711705 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213457965647 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740869421263 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680558135075 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126652930669 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574699830522 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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