The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The pie graph depicts different types of careers done by Anthropology graduates after acquiring their bachelor’s degree. Meanwhile, the table compares their income earned in different occupations after 5 years

Overall, a majority of Anthropology graduates engaged with full-time work, while the opposition was seen in part-time work and postgrad study. In addition, Anthropology made the most money out of freelance consultants and government sector

Regarding the pie chart, apparently full-time job constituted more than half of the total destinations of Anthropology graduates, with 52%. In contrast, the figure for those who were part-time employees and did postgrad study was remarkably lower with merely 5%. Moreover, graduates who were clueless about what to do and those who did postgrad study full time shared the same proportion of 8%. And the remaining figures accounted for around 12% to 15% of the whole chart

After 5 years of working, a vast majority of Anthropology graduates working in government sector, private companies and as freelance consultants received a significantly high minimum wage which was $100,000 ( 50%, 30% and 40% respectively). On the other hand, the percentage of Anthropologists who earned less than $75,000 was relatively lower, with only 20% in each section of freelance consultants and government sector, which were roughly doubled by that of private companies. Finally, the salary range between $75,000 and $99,999 was received the most by freelance consultants with 40%

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, if, moreover, regarding, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5670995671 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02496127823 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588744588745 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6764017753 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.75 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177126824589 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814761335787 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587102363013 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11540728647 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563707421759 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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