The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their
undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five
years.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates what Anthropology students of a university do after graduation while the table shows their income five years later.
Obviously, after graduating, most students are employed in a full-time job, and a lesser amount of them either do part-time jobs or study postgraduate or unemployed. Overall, in five years, Anthropology students do mainly three categories of career: freelance consultants, government sector, and private companies.
Regarding the pie chart, it is clear that half of the graduated students have a full-time job, and a small amount of them also study postgraduate (about 8%). Nearly a fifth of students employed in a part-time job, and there is a small number of 5% of students study postgraduate while doing part-time jobs. Unemployed students and unknown are accounted for 12% and 8% of the pie chart respectively.
Looking at the table, in the wage range between $25.000 to $49.999 and $50.000 to $74.999, students who have private companies make up the majority, 10% and 35%, respectively. Meanwhile, both other two types of employment cover 5% and 15% sequentially. The majority of freelance consultants, about 40%, have the salary range of $75.000 - $99.999, as many as consultants who have more than $100.000 income. Private companies' employer's salary has the lowest percentage among these two ranges, accounting for 25% and 30%.
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- The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summaries the information by selecting and reporting t 84
- The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ployed in a part-time job, and there is a small number of 5% of students study postgraduate while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28440366972 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98684591407 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6055737995 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121807692986 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585663796864 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10917715573 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122408269513 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150586799758 0.0819641961636 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.