The chart graph shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different types of attractions from 1980 to 2010
The provided chart graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to four different destinations in Scotland from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, while the percentage of tourists to the zoo and castle experienced an upward tendency, the opposite was true for aquarium and festival. Noticeably, the castle was the most popular attraction in Scotland for most of the period.
In 1980, standing at nearly 25%, the proportion of castle visitors was much higher than that of the zoo, which stood at 10%. Over the next 15 years, that figure of castle rocketed and reached the peak of 45% in 1995. Despite declining in the last 15 years, nonetheless, at 35% in 2010, it still held the first position. On the other hand, the percentage of people visiting zoo registered a mild fluctuation in the first 20 years of the course before increasing to more than 20% in 2010.
Regarding the remaining categories, the festival was the choice of approximately 30% of Scotland visitors in 1980, compared to 20% of aquarium. However, the proportion of visitors to the festival then underwent a steady drop throughout the course, ending at 20% in 2010. Meanwhile, the period from 1980 to 1985 observed a considerable increase from 20% to nearly 35% in the percentage of people visiting aquarium but this figure then decreased and hit the rough of below 10% in the final year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96052631579 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77540796111 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530701754386 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4411538284 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250656275597 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971002210488 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109238890827 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181720511581 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131000360479 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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