The chart illustrates the number of travelers to Ashdown Museum among the two consecutive years and the pie diagrams depict the visitor's satisfaction level during their visit in the museum before and after reconstruction during the same period.
The chart illustrates the number of travelers to Ashdown Museum among the two consecutive years and the pie diagrams depict the visitor's satisfaction level during their visit in the museum before and after reconstruction during the same period. Overall, it can be seen that after rebuilding the museum, the number of visitors is increasing in trend and the study shows that visitors are very satisfied than before while the dissatisfaction level is decreased dramatically.
In details, after refurbishment the backpackers are rising in trend that is from 74000 to 92000 and the number of satisfied visitors is 40% which was 30% before. In addition to that, very satisfied visitors are dramatically changed that is more than twice as compared to former and dissatisfied visitor are fallen to two-third approximately that is from 40% to 15%. On the other hand, very dissatisfied level is declined to half of the previous study which is 10% to 5% while the no response participants are remained same in the period which is only 5%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-05 | Molla Md Rezaul Karim | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
...e years and the pie diagrams depict the visitors satisfaction level during their visit i...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
third, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96610611191 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.0970788912 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.4 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497411129918 0.215688989381 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27477988913 0.103423049105 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.365165070895 0.0843802449381 433% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.424649615391 0.15604864568 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.320855619058 0.0819641961636 391% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.