It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement

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It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？

In this period of modern technology, many people think that robotic cars are broadly used by the independents and the community and they will be benefitted more. some people argue that autonomous car will affect employment however, I am agreed with this notion because robo-car could reduce carbon emission, assist disable people and find desired location easily. My opinion with this view will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

Supporting my agreement to the given statement, I firmly believe that self-driving car will assist the environment to reduce carbon emission so that people are less impacted of continuously changing of climate. To cite an example, these types of vehicles can be used as a sharing car and more people can utilize this vehicle as it can be served all the time without any driver. Moreover, Driverless auto can avoid traffic jam smoothly because of advent of this technology it can use artificial intelligence to identify the traffic condition and create a path with most possible shortest time to reach desired destination. In addition to that, physically disabled people can easily afford this car without help of driver.

On the other hands, it will affect the employment of driver community. The drivers could be lost their jobs which will affect the society in different ways. For an instance, these classes of people can be going to underworld and do some terrorist activity. Another point is that Still people have trust issues with driverless cars although it has been tested before final run and this type of car is too expensive to afford for developing countries like us.

In conclusion, though there are some negative impacts for using robo-car, it will gift us great facility for our future generation. I firmly believe that the aforementioned points are strongly supporting my viewpoint.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...nity and they will be benefitted more. some people argue that autonomous car will a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19536423841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71790572585 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8808961651 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254082723101 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928076775579 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438182661987 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16226844393 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372057659296 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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