The two figures show rates of marriages and divorces in America from 1970 to 2000, and the states of marriage of American adults in two different years 1970 and 2000.
It is clear that there was a decline in the marriage rates, while the divorce people remained unchanged over the survey period. In the second chart, married group is the major proportion, whereas widowed and divorced people are the minority groups.
In 1970, the number of marriage people is 2.5 million. This is the largest number in both groups, and it maintained that rate until 1980, before reducing to only 2 million in the end of the period. The divorces have smaller rates of people than married people, with only 1million in 1970. Although, there was slight increase in 1980, by 0.4 million, the number of divorced people returned to the starting point in two last years.
Moving to marital status part, the highest percentage is the part of people who are married in 1970, at 70%, then fell to just under 60% in 2000. In contrast, both parts of widowed and divorced people are lowest parts with all of them are below 10% throughout the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the lowest'.
Suggestion: are the lowest
...th parts of widowed and divorced people are lowest parts with all of them are below 10% th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70558375635 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23857292493 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3786118869 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321615039869 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128381085713 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875588085915 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195483712651 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931602195023 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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