Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the human is facing many global problems such as hunger, flood, migration, terrorism; and the biggest issue is the climate change. The climate change is the unusual changing phenomenon of climate; it could be the El Nino that causes to storm and flood in the southern hemisphere of the Earth. To save the world and our future generations, not only should people act to prevent the climate change, but also they need to get some ways to live with it.
In the way of preventing the climate change, I would propose to keep actions and solutions that these could reduce the impact of the climate change. An example of this is controlling of forest decline, which will decrease the El Nino state as mentioned above. Indeed, the science demonstrates that if people stop devastating the green area, it enables to give a good signal on reinforcing the environment conditions. In addition, the drought controlling also take an important role in situation of global warming. The solutions of this issue include of protecting the river corridor or diver direction, laying down the hydro-power plants. By doing these actions, the drought conditions will be improvement, and the climate change will be cut down too.
Other things people could do are find the way to live with the climate change. Firstly, to live on the way of the El Nino, people could reinforce their house, which protect them during the flood or storm. Moreover, the inhabitants will be informed in advance when the El Nino will start; it helps them have time to prepare and minimize the damage. Secondly, in the drought area, people could plant and grow up the tree could bear the dry status. This will make the land better and people will have enough food for their life.
In conclusion, by doing both of preventing the climate change and of finding the way to live with it; the human will have more chance to survive and save the Earth for our generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'storming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: storming
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265415549598 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.163538873995 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0455764075067 0.0946595960268 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0268096514745 0.0501214627716 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0348525469169 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0938337801609 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0402144772118 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48606211289 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321715817694 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00804289544236 0.00163938923432 491% => OK
Determiners: 0.134048257373 0.0861772015684 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0428954423592 0.021408717616 200% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0107238605898 0.011925033212 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1927.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78678678679 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33033033033 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237237237237 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132132132132 0.203846283523 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0960960960961 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48606211289 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528528528529 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.7574016997 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8170227129 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.466666667 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 45.9237237237 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.77380952381 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223770115424 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130041760947 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729898983554 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.63013940481 0.534860350844 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139046760186 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12328174567 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110251515297 0.0742795772207 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.554981289799 0.324371583561 171% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0395966722967 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196537619125 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429357141441 0.058150111329 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.