Essay topics:
The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The bar chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Overall, the smallest percentage of Service Industry was 4 in 1992, where IT Industry was more than 14 in 2000.
According to the data provided, IT was about 6% in 1992, moreover, Service was the same in 1994. After one year, this Industry shows 8%. However, IT represented 8 percent, while Service remained unchanged. In 1996 IT company climbed sharply, whilst Service rose slightly. At the last year, first industry reached the peak and second constructed only 8.
At the end, IT Industry increased dramatically for 8 years, whereas Service Industry grew less than first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... Service remained unchanged. In 1996 IT company climbed sharply, whilst Service rose sl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 542.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97247706422 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61775129322 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 149.4 283.868780488 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7180407386 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.75 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248018383795 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139903096089 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.287862587856 0.0843802449381 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18835566283 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230243259648 0.0819641961636 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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