The chart shows the consumption of sales of coffee in five different cities.
The given chart illustrates the consumption and sales of coffee and tea in the past 4 weeks in five cities of Australia. Units are indicated in the percentage of city residents.
Overall, it can be seen that the highest proportion of citizens visited a cafe for coffee or tea in all cities except Adelaide. While the sale of fresh coffee was the lowest in each given city.
In Sydney and Melbourne, there were around 43% of residents who purchased fresh coffee, whereas the sale of instant coffee was at 45% and 48% in both cities, respectively. There were just about 35% of fresh coffee buyers in Brisbane and Adelaide, While around half of the population bought instant coffee in both cities. In Hobart, The consumer of fresh coffee and instant coffee was about 40% and 54%, respectively.
Besides, around 60% of citizens went to a cafe for tea or coffee in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart. While in Brisbane and Adelaide, 55% and 50% of residents visited a cafe for the sake of coffee or tea, respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e or tea in all cities except Adelaide. While the sale of fresh coffee was the lowest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60750268417 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7790202121 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270364513513 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129056332341 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116086007794 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191932874911 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132569530741 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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