The chart shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices in 2005, 2006, 2007 and 2008. [FTSE 100 = UK Market Index, Dow Jones = US Market Index, KOSPI = Korean Market Index, CAC 40 = French Market Index]
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrate the data about four major international money market's end of year value in year of 2005, 2006,2008 and 2008.
Overall ,the highest Market value was in year of 2007 which was the u.s market index and the lowest market value in every year which was Korean market index.
It was clearly shown in bar graph the highest money market index was Dow Jones market index in 2007and it was almost 1300. in 2008 the us market value was down by 4000 as compared the year of 2007.the FTSE100 UK market value was 7000 in 2007 and in 2008 it was decreased by 1000.while, the CAC 40 french market index was 7000 in 2007 and it was almost same as compared 2006 market value and in 2008 it was 3000. Furthermore, the Korean market index money value was less-than 2000 in every year.
The other hand, in year of 2005 the U.S market value was 11000 and in 2006 it was increased by 2000. The FTSE Market index was 5000 in year of 2005 and in 2006 it was increased by 1000. lastly, the French market index was 5000 In year of 2005.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, lastly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29081632653 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00729484915 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.382653061224 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3775509721 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498773330482 0.215688989381 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.326255102772 0.103423049105 315% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675017590609 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.378204423568 0.15604864568 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498742974621 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.42 61.2550243902 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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