The chart shows the exchange rate between the US Dollar and the British Pound

Essay topics:

The chart shows the exchange rate between the US Dollar and the British Pound

The line graph illustrates the value between the US dollar versus the value of the British pound.

It can be seen clearly that the rate of exchange was fluctuated from 1973 to 1988.

At first, before falling dramatically in almost 2 years from 1975 to 1977, the price of the British pound had two times to

reach at peak by 2.5 in 1973 and a half year of 1975.

Then, the period of 8 years (1977 to 1985) witnessed a significantly various. The rare increased smoothly in 4 years of

period (1977 to 1980) from over 1.5 to nearly 2.5 and kept it stably in 1 year. The last 4 years of the period, the cost of

the British pound went down suddenly from 2.5 to around 1.25.

Finally, last 4 years from 1985 to 1988, there was a sharply growth in comparision value between the US dollar and the

British pound. In 1985, the rate bottomed out at nearly 1.25 then rose in next 3 years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the British pound had two times to reach at peak by 2.5 in 1973 and a half year ...
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...he rare increased smoothly in 4 years of period 1977 to 1980 from over 1.5 to nea...
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... last 4 years of the period, the cost of the British pound went down suddenly fro...
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... 4 years of the period, the cost of the British pound went down suddenly from 2...
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Message: You used an adverb ('sharply') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...st 4 years from 1985 to 1988, there was a sharply growth in comparision value between the US dol...
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...sion value between the US dollar and the British pound. In 1985, the rate bottome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38323353293 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24791089105 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 184.5 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3108492317 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245981943747 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114552675083 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107530133726 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107263683348 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944483899183 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.48 61.2550243902 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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