The bar chart compares the frequency of eating at fast-food restaurants among people in the USA between 2003 and 2013. Overall, what stands out from the chart is that many people tended to eat once a week and once or twice a month at fast-food restaurants while the minority preferred to eat every day and never.
Looking at the details, the number of people who ate at a fast-food restaurant on a daily basis was a smaller proportion than others with just under 5% for all three years. As regards several times a week, both 2003 and 2013 were just over 15% which is 5% lower than the figure of 2006. If we look at once a week, this frequency was popular in both 2003 and 2006 with just over 30% and the figure decreased in 2013 to approximately 28%.
In 2003 and 2013 most people chose to eat once or twice a month at fast-food restaurants while a statistic for 2006 stood at a fifth. Only around 15% of people ate at fast-food restaurants a few times a year for all three years which is higher proportion than those who tended to eat never, with 15% and 5% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...minority preferred to eat every day and never. Looking at the details, the number of...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'eat'.
Suggestion: never eat
...her proportion than those who tended to eat never, with 15% and 5% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.385 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44314858328 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.9618805437 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321781234241 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184215713539 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129845358508 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244318587178 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078006333118 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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