The chart shows information of New Zealand's visitor: Country of origin
The chart shows the country that New Zealand's visitors come from.
The largest percentage, 40 percent, is visitor come from Australia, and the third rank is visitor come from the UK. But United State just has only 9% visitor to New Zealand.
Beside these countries, we have other visitors come from East Asia, they are South Korea, Japan and China. While China and Japan have total nine percent visitor come to visit New Zealand, just has only three percent people from South Korea.
New Zealand not only have visitors from six above countries, it also has about 27% visitors from other countries which is rank number two.
In short, Australia, US and UK have more visitors come to New Zealand because they are English speaking countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, third, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 625.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11476292341 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1596590221 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289271228478 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199430477062 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156390463213 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239610519026 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159620459698 0.0819641961636 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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