Your English Teacher wants you to write a story. This is the title of your story:
How I met my best friend
Write your story in about 100 words on your answer sheet
I met my best friend, Duc at 6th grade, just only 10 days after I moved to secondary school. At first, I thought he was smart with his glasses and actually he was. My teacher arranged me to sit at a table after him. On the mathematic subject at one day, I got a hard math that I could not make it. I looked around to see who could help me. At that time, Duc turned back and ask me what he could help. He explained clearly and guide me the best way to solve that math. I really impressed with his intelligence and friendly. And from that day, we are more and more close together and he is my best friend so far.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, look, really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 487.0 1207.87684729 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 242.827586207 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.92741935484 5.00649968141 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.92707691288 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12577646951 2.71678728327 78% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 139.433497537 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 149.4 379.143842365 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.57093596059 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.2647843477 50.4703680194 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.1111111111 104.977214359 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0505575138261 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219502189837 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263535480551 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505575138261 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 12.6369458128 32% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 53.1260098522 173% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.9458128079 33% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.92 11.5310837438 43% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 8.32886699507 70% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 55.0591133005 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 10.5123152709 38% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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