the chart shows the number of internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013
presented is the graph illustrating the quantity of people who used social network in Greece, Denmark, Canada and the world average from 1998 to 2013. Overall, it's clear that cyberspace utilized more popular than in Canada and Denmark. It's also notice that while Greece had fewer users, which closed to the world average, it also had an upward trend just as other states in the given time scale.
looking at the graph more closely, there was a swift upturn roughly quadrupled from 1998 to 2003 in Denmark at 23% in1998 and 80% in 2003, but after that the amount of the users only gradually went up between 2003 and 2013. however, the state was still the highest compared with other countries without holding 2nd position in 1998. at the same time , Canada was the first place about using network with near 30%, and then while growth after 2003 for Canada was slow, the nation's overall number of users ultimately expanded by more than three fold from 1998 to 2003.
on the other hand , Greece was lower than the world average in1998 with near 3% AND NEAR 5%, respectively. Although both Greece and the world average were grown steadily each year over 20000 people and near 10000 people, respectively. in the 2003-2013 period, the gap between the world and three countries included in the chart had widened at the end year of the give timescale chart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15329647664 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9971706985 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.888888889 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247603203456 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100159014961 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773109701431 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15985582454 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554326368128 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.