The chart shows the percentage of industry sectors contribute to the economy of Turkey and India in 2000

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The chart shows the percentage of industry sectors contribute to the economy of Turkey and India in 2000

The two pie charts delineate how eight different industry sectors contributed to turkey and India in 2000.
Overall, It can be manifested that in India the construction contributed the least to the economy and husbandry was the most significant sector, as contrary in Turkey, health care and education become the highest contributors while the lowest was made by finance, business, and other services.
Firstly, construction had the lowest percentage in India and it accounted for a mere 3 percent in the 2000 year. it experiences more than three-fold highest to one-ten in Turkey. Income from trade utilizes sand transportation was 14 percent in India and experienced and dramatic growth of 2 percent in Turkish. In 2000 in the industry sectors contribute manufacturing and finances businesses and another service made of 8 percent and 5 percent of the in India economy respectively and these figures rose 12 percent and 8 percent in Turkey.
In contrast and the opposite side can be noticed for the remaining sectors, where agriculture comprised 24 percent( almost a quarter) which was the highest economic sector contribute to India. and in fell10 percent in Turkey. government and leisure and hospitality sectors 12 percentage of India and as compared to a 3 percent decrease in Turkish. With the figure of trade ,utilize percent in India and Turkey 14 percent and 16 percent respectively.notably contribution from health care and education did not change at all and remained in constant both countries at 17 percent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21632653061 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09178217774 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6008376243 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341926194326 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159126256535 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113295711128 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259908944568 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113235259571 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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