The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues
and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows how many tickets were sold to sports events, theme parks
and movies in 2009 and the table reveals ticket prices to various venues in the same
year. Going to the cinema was both the most popular and the cheapest form of
entertainment in 2009.
Cinemas attracted more people than theme parks and sports combined. Whilst
1,050,000 people attended movies, only a third of that number visited theme parks,
and a mere 150,000 went to sports games.
Movie tickets were far cheaper than other forms of entertainment. Attendance
at a football game in 2009 cost around $73, with little reduction for families.
Basketball and cricket games cost less, at $34 and $24 respectively for a single
admission. However, a family ticket to cricket, at $80, showed considerable savings.
Theme parks were only slightly less expensive than football matches at $70 a single,
but there was a significant reduction in the price of a family concession with four
people gaining entry for the price of three. Movie tickets at $15 for one, and $55 for
four, were the cheapest.
Overall, the cinema was the most affordable entertainment option
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...art shows how many tickets were sold to sports events, theme parks and movies in 200...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Year
... prices to various venues in the same year. Going to the cinema was both the most ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Entertainment
...most popular and the cheapest form of entertainment in 2009. Cinemas attracted more peop...
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Line 13, column 28, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...eme parks, and a mere 150,000 went to sports games. Movie tickets were far cheape...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...er forms of entertainment. Attendance at a football game in 2009 cost around 3, ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Admission
... at 4 and 4 respectively for a single admission. However, a family ticket to cricket, a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...rice of a family concession with four people gaining entry for the price of three. M...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Four
...Movie tickets at 5 for one, and 5 for four, were the cheapest. Overall, the cin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11052631579 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63874812927 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0134278739 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107211531515 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429228376664 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03014722137 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043329622903 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490277434598 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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