The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.
The above diagrams illustrate how five selected countries utilizes their water in three different areas: industry, agriculture and domestic purposes in year of 2000.
The pie graph, summarises the water usage proportion into the three water usage areas, where agriculture accounts for the largest water consumption amount and the least amount of water is used for domestic needs. On the other hand, in accordance to the second chart's presentation, india uses 92% of its water in agriculture while Canada consumes most of its water for industrial reasons.
surprisingly, the New Zealand is the only country who have the largest water consumption rate for domestic purpose, 46%, while they have the second least water consumption rate on industrial needs after india.
The overall, the graphs shows, that countries least use the water on domestic purpose while their water consumption on agriculture accounts for the largest proportion. On the contrary, the countries Canada and China are vise versa in water consumption area.
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. 67
- The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'charts'' or 'chart's'?
Suggestion: charts'; chart's
...other hand, in accordance to the second charts presentation, india uses 92% of its wat...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Surprisingly
... of its water for industrial reasons. surprisingly, the New Zealand is the only country wh...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sumption rate for domestic purpose, 46%, while they have the second least water c...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'countries the least'.
Suggestion: countries the least
...a. The overall, the graphs shows, that countries least use the water on domestic purpose while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71796684123 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7707002638 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203956829803 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120311968899 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024417591137 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136294616065 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347688967977 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.