The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050
The pie charts provided reveals some stricking changes which predicted in the ages of citizens in two different countries, namely Yemen and Italy measured in proportion in 2002 and the year 2050.
In general, both of two countries will have an inreasing number of people in the elder group go with the decline of children.
It is guessed that the figure of citizens who in 0 to 14 years old group will be decreased considerably from more than half (50.1%) to 37.0% in the year 2050, while, the proportion of individuals in the working ages from 15 to 59 yeas old will be steady soared from 46.3% to 57.3% after half a decade. The figure of people who retired also grow slowly from 3.6% in 2000 to 5.7% in 2050.
Whereas in contrats, the most significant change that forecasted will be the over 60 years old group which dramatically increased nearly 2 times, from 24.1% to 42.3%. Unlike Yemen, people between 15 years old and 59 years old predicted to be fallen 15.4% (from 61.6% to 46.2%) after 50 years and so is the children group which will be declined rapidly 2.8% (from 14.3% in 2000 to 11.5% in 2050)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...group go with the decline of children. It is guessed that the figure of citizen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37274103096 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.098962848 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108140554384 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662822335707 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644152821793 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767040473632 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680097259234 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.82 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.4 10.3012195122 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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