The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries Australia india Germany Nigeria UK Brazil Agriculture 8 84 32 86 28 74 Industry 48 9 61 3 67 9 Domestic 14 7 7 11 5 17

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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries.

Australia india Germany Nigeria UK Brazil
Agriculture 8% 84% 32% 86% 28% 74%
Industry 48% 9% 61% 3% 67% 9%
Domestic 14% 7% 7% 11% 5% 17%

The table chart illustrates the information about proportion of water consumption in different purpose in Australia, India, Germany, Nigeria, UK and brazil.
Overall, it can be seen that more consumption of water use in agriculture and secondly in industries, least amount of water use in domestic purpose. The most water consumption countries are India and Nigeria as compared to all nations.
Looking the table in more detail, it can be clear that in agriculture the highest proportion of water consumption in Nigeria, India, and Brazil stand at 86%, 84 % and 74% respectively. However, the lowest utilization of water in great Britain at 28 %. The consumption of water is stood at about same 38 % and 32 % in Australia and Germany.
Secondly in industries the UK consumes greatest proportion of water stood at 67%, as opposed to 3% in Nigeria. in India and Brazil, the consumption of water same at 9%. For the domestic purposes, the proportion of water which is consumed by Brazil, Australia, Nigeria at 17%,14%and 11% respectively. india and Germany use same proportion of water at 7% in household, While UK is least consumer of water at 5% .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06878306878 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03751300903 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.93635833 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383136983372 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17604470586 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809978001473 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24596608416 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543852123814 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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