People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are very clear about their career goal, so they get more satisfaction then those who frequently change their job. I agree with this notion because we can gain mastery in specified field , which leads to more satisfaction.
First reason for agreement to when people are totally clear about their path than they could continuously work according to their plans, which is not beneficial for their career but also for their time. After, some time they get high position in their field. To be more precise, if they could select their career aims early, they more the save time, less chance of wasting the time on unnecessary objects. Thus, they would more productive by optimum utilization of resources and time. For example, if one person complete his graduation in journalism and after that he get job in good channel as an anchor with high wage. Then person definitely try to give its hundred percent for hole time and will get promotion by his channel. This is possible due to his satisfaction and stability in his job. As a result if people clear about his desire jobs and studies are likely to get more pleasure.
Although clear career ambitions are vital, variations in jobs good for broaden their career horizon. There are two main factors for satisfaction by changing jobs very often. Firstly, people alter their occupation for finding well paid job opportunities to achieve a satisfactory level in their lives. Secondly, sometimes they are less satisfied with previous work place’s vicinity due to unfamiliar colleagues. Hence, they want to seek good job with cooperative environment.
In conclusion, while altering the job is good for experience in different work places, clear career opportunities an offer right direction with early success.
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- People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09655172414 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63744305267 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0533650779 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230782546152 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793083543616 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673040175263 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156159099273 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573173646858 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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