The charts below give infornation about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.

Essay topics:

The charts below give infornation about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.

The given first pie chart reveals the information about three different ways in which water can be used and the second horizontal chart illustrates about the three stages of water used by four different countries: Canada, New Zealand, India and China in year 2000. The data is celibrated in percentum which in clearly and coherently representaion.

It can be seen that, in all over the world, 70% of the water were used in the agriculture activities in the year 2000. Furthermore, 22% water was used in the industry departments. Moreover, rest of the 8% of the water had been used for the domestic works in the year 2000.

As far as trend is concerned, in Canada 8% of water were used in agriculture, 12% were used in domestic and 80% water was used in industry. In addition to this, 44% water was used in agriculture, 46% were used in domestic and 10% water was used in industry in New Zealand. Apart from all this, in India and China 92% and 62% water was used by agriculture, 5% and 9% were used in domestic and at last 3% and 22% water was used in industry in year 2000 respectively.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53535353535 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66046109911 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.617266249 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399460318997 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19490219922 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880251241684 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285888850317 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577630218107 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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