The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the proportion of agricultural products in two particular areas of the nation.
Overall, it is clear to see that the percentage of vegetables and grain in the East is very different from those in Western Region. Besides, meat products occupies the same rate in both areas.
The percentage of vegetables is at the highest place, about 20% in Eastern Region while in the West side, it is a very small number, only 5%. In contrast, grain in the East has the smallest percentage 45% of all agricultural products and they produce those three times the grain percentage in the West than in the East.
The percentage of meat at both regions is exactly the same, 35% of all products. Meanwhile, the West has 15% of dairy products and the East has twice times the percentage of dairy products than the West,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64122703434 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506944444444 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3216919502 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111911362471 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596986982049 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318925924029 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838088999025 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297551325779 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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