The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The map compares the difference of a seaside village after transformation between 1995 and present. The village undergone a remarkable change in the period from 1995 to present. Besides some new constructions, some facilities are knocked down and some are replaced.
In the housing area, two new houses are built in the north-west and there are two more ones added on the same side of the road in the west side of the village. The golf course has been constructed in the place of the farmland. To the south of it, there is a forest park has been cut down to make room for the tennis court.
In the south-west of the village, the chain shopping stores are changed the use into restaurants and also the fish market into the apartments area. There is a construction of a new car park which is located next to the hotel to the south-east of the rural town. The café on the seashore is still existed but the fishing port is demolished.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are replaced. In the housing area, two new houses are built in the north-we...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'apartments'' or 'apartment's'?
Suggestion: apartments'; apartment's
...rants and also the fish market into the apartments area. There is a construction of a new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56213017751 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61792695518 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3465579637 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100338038998 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485771351551 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886059031934 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681604855485 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849449944427 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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