The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides the information about the number of visitors traveling a Caribbean island from the years 2010 and 2017.
To commence with, visitors on ships in 2011 was 0.5 million which was gradually increased by 1 million in 2014 and continuously esclating to 105 million visitors in the year 2016 whereas, visitors staying on island had around 0.7 million of tourists and from the the year 2012 to 2016 the numbers of visitor was same around 1.2 million. Furthermore, both cruise ship and island visitors intersected at 1.4 million.
Additionally, total of both visitors in 2011 has 1.3 millions and increased to 2.5 million and in 2014 and kept constant till the year 2016 which was up to 2.45 million.
Overall, it is clearly noticed in the line graph that visitors staying on cruise ships, island and total on their highest point in the year 2017 was respectively, 2 million, 1.5 million and 3.5 million and lin the initial year cruiseship visitors were lowest on 0.3 millions visitors whereas island visitors were at around 0.7 million and total was 1 million visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...around 0.7 million of tourists and from the the year 2012 to 2016 the numbers of visito...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...around 0.7 million of tourists and from the the year 2012 to 2016 the numbers of visito...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the lowest'.
Suggestion: were the lowest
...in the initial year cruiseship visitors were lowest on 0.3 millions visitors whereas island...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92391304348 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57851655745 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505434782609 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.717932923 43.030603864 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.2 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00420406080833 0.215688989381 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00545505720342 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0109101144068 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00681882150427 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118105452931 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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