The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.
The pie charts give information about how the world's water is distributed, while the bar chart details the percentage of water used in agriculture, domestic consumption and industry in three countries.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that fresh water accounts for the smallest share of water usage in the world. Majority of its water comes from ice and glaciers. While water in Egypt and Saudia Arabia is mainly used for agricultural purposes, in Canada it is mostly used in the industry sector.
To be more specific, the pie chart shows that 97% of World water is salty compared to only 3% fresh water. Almost three-quarters of fresh water is made up of glaciers and ice as opposed to 20% groundwater and 1% surface water.
Turning to the consumption of water in three countries, both Egypt and Saudia Arabia use almost 80 % of its source for agriculture in comparison with domestic usage and industry accounts for about 15 % and 10%, respectively. In contrast, It is clearly shown that in Canada most water is used in the industry sector (80%). Domestic and agriculture take only 10% of water
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93157894737 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77012346013 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7217597108 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437856441274 0.215688989381 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205922475196 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824008803424 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302109364435 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691932587427 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.