The pie chart renders information about decisions made by the customers for buying mobile phones in countries A and B. The mobile phone purchasers make decisions with respect to factors such as price, design, brand and also recommendations made by their companions.
In country A, price is considered by most of the users and most of them have made their decision depending on this factor whereas in country B less importance is given to price. More priority is given to design in country B. It seen that the second highest factor considered by the people of both countries is the suggestion given by their friends.
On comparison, about 50 percent of people in country A have preferred the price of the product whereas in country B price accounts only for 9 percent, being the least considered factor. The pie chart clearly illustrates that design is highly preferred in country B but in country A only 10 percent of the people give priority to how the product is designed. Though, around 7 percent of the consumers take into account the factor called brand in country A, people giving more importance to brand in country B has increased. Both the countries are almost similar in listening to their friend's advice where country A has 33 percent for friend's recommendation and the same for country B is 32 percent.
Hence it is obvious from the pie chart that in country A the price takes precedence over the other reasons considered by the users and in country B it is the design that takes the superiority.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: A; The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, second, so, whereas, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7786259542 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70663169579 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458015267176 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8502090795 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974891692015 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583857218868 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872247816332 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902058315908 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112104240892 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.