The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because technology is replacing its function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is considered by some people that the amount spent by the government for the libraries' welfare is a mere loss. they also have a notion that the internet and various softwares are utilized instead of the libraries. this essay elucidates the development and notorious functions of the technology which now does the work of a library.
There is a verity that the libraries are known to be the powerhouse of knowledge. some people give meticulous importance in preserving this house of books. this is due to the naked truth that the books render valuable information regarding a variety of subjects. For example, some illustrious historical books are the source of the past occurrences. also, the characteristics of great inspiring leaders are provided by the autobiography books. What would have happened if our ancestors had forgotten to preserve these books? In accordance to the sorted things, it is emphasized to spend certain amount of money for the preservance of the libraries.
Secondly,there has been a tremendous progress in the increment of websites.this in turn makes the younger generation forget about the presence of such valuable places called libraries. The kids of the 21st century give least preference to these libraries as they are able to find eminent writings and biographies on the webpages. For example, sedate and studious students in schools exploit their laptops and latest devices to search regarding their studies. Consequently, they have the required information on their finger tips.
To conclude, the libraries are found to be the precious source of information. But on the other hand the inventions on the internet world had substituted the place of libraries. I strongly abide by the certitude that the technology has compensated for the features of a library.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03665895973 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2448513237 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0729042628089 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225646820042 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025607268614 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462417250005 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200561845244 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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