The charts below show information about three different deserts around the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
Deserts are occupied all around the globe and have harsh environment; however, some kind of animals and plants are resilient to this situation, also they can thrive. Here, we want to describe three well-known deserts in different areas of the world. They are Sahara Desert in Africa, Taklimakan Desert in Asia, and Great Basin Desert in North America.
Among them, Sahara Desert is the largest one, with 9,000,000 sq km Area, then Taklimakan desert, and finally Great Basin Desert.
If we consider their average annual reinfall, Great Basin Desert has the most one, with up to 51 cm annual reinfall. Taklimakan Desert has the lowest average between them, with 1 cm average rainfall. which probably has the thoughest condition for plants to thrive there.
If we discuss about their average temperature and temperature extremes, both Sahara Desert and Great Basin Desert have the highest average temperatures, with 30c in summer. The lowest temperatures is in Taklimakan Desert with -9C in winter, which is really frigid and probably few creatures can survive there in winters. Extremest temperature which have been recorded is in Sahara Desert, with 58C, but Great Basin desert has a close extreme, meaning 57c.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
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Line 13, column 322, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Extremest'.
Suggestion: The Extremest
...creatures can survive there in winters. Extremest temperature which have been recorded is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, really, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27040816327 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51604596479 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7751387858 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107785479444 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05379573619 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038013943557 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750060375074 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392350501824 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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