what creates an ideal education system?
To have better professional careers, it is necessary to have standard and percise educational system. To achieve this goal, we need to alter our educational system and use the experience of other pioneer countries in this field.
nowadays many professional graduated students; including engineers, doctors, etc. are very knowlegable in theorical fields, but are somehow weak in practical jobs and this fact is really related to the way they have been trained in university and also in schools.
In my oponion, the basic personality of us form from our childhood and it is really important to have a strong plan for our schools. Our educational system shouldnt be forcefully, on the contrary it should encourage children and teenagers to show their productivity and have a mutual class, not merely teacher teaches and the other ones just watch.
If we want to consider our universities, especially in engineering, we come across with a lot of problems, because our lessons are almost practical and it doesn't include practical lessons and this is really harmful and would lead to many problems in real job. So I believe our theorical lessons should be accompanied by practical visiting and training.
Finally, if we want to have a better society and professional careers, we need to alter our educational system and live our life to the full.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1221719457 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90766850723 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.293104198 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.777777778 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961167372197 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487607618936 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555922014474 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657834544031 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625760039553 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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