The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.

The bar graph illustrate the distinct developing and industrialised countries participation in education and science.
In terms of average years of schooling reviewed,developing countries and compared between 1980 and 1990. Developing countries at 2.5 years of schooling in1980 than slightly increased at 3.5 years of schooling Compared by 1990. Industrialised countries at 8.3 years of schooling in1980 than rose up nearly 10.2 years of schooling Compared by 1990.
In terms of scientist and technicians per 1000 people reviewed. Similar to this graph. In 1980 approximately 10 per week 1000 people than slightly nearly 10.5 per 1000 people compared by 1990. In industrialised countries 1980, 40.1 per 1000 people than compared by 1990 it rise up to per 1000 people.
Finally, the spending on research and development in 1980 to 1990. In 1980 development countries 50$us billions than fall in us $ billions in 1990. The second was approximately 150$ us $ billions in 1980 than growth in 350$ us $ billions in 1990.
Overall, moreover industrialised countries highest number of schooling in 1990 compared by two graph. Developing countried lower number of spending and development in 1990.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$150'.
Suggestion: $150
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Suggestion: $350
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Suggestion: countries the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45652173913 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26142713773 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423913043478 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6294157626 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301362281594 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14271978224 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898541225073 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202864359469 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697676309488 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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