The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The bar chart illustrates the quantities of Japanese tourists who traveled different countries over a course of 10 years starting from 1985 while the line graph delineates the percentages of these tourists who visited Australia in particular between 1985 and 1994.

Overall, it is clearly evident that the number of Japanese who made overseas travels soared and this is also true for the Australian visiting travelers from Japan.

As can be seen from the demonstrate, around 5 million Japanese inhabitants traveled to different countries in 1985 which kept on leaping each year except in 1991. From approximately 6 million visitors in 1986, it went as high as 12 million in just 7 years. Finally, in 1995, the number of Japanese citizens traveling abroad had reached about 15 million which was three times higher than that of a decade earlier.

The figure of Japanese tourists registered to stand at 2% in 1985 and with a steady increase the figure went as high as roughly 5% in 1988. The next year, the number declined slightly but went higher each year in subsequent years. Australia received more than 6% Japanese tourers in 1993, the highest, which stood at exactly 6% in 1994.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rs from Japan. As can be seen from the demonstrate, around 5 million Japanese inhabitants ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03015075377 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62943269837 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7065875864 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324258126903 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12572749998 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832441404886 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188571992786 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583164337115 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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