The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The give is the bar chart illustrates data about how many tourists traveling oversea in japan and the line graph compares the percentage of Japanese tourists arriving in Australia from over a decade period from 1985 to 1995.
According to the bar chart, the number of Japanese people traveling foreign was about 5 million in1985 while there was a sharp growth to nearly 11 million during the five years until 1990. Moreover, after decreasing slightly with around just over 10 in 1991, this statistic experienced rapidly rising with exactly 12 million in 1993. Following this, the figure reached a peak of approximately 15 in 1995. Associating with the line graph the proportion of foreigners in japan coming to Australia's destination accounted for 2% in 1985, after which there was a dramatical climb to just around 5% between 1985 and 1988. Although the correlative figure dipped to over 4% in 1995, it rocketed to just over 6% in 1993. A gradual fall was seen in the Japanese tourists traveling to Australia after 1994.
it is clear that when looking at two graphs comparatively that there was a positive between the number of people traveling oversea in japan and Australi's share of japan's tourist market. The more japanese foreigners commute abroad, the more the percentage of choice of Australia is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...raveling to Australia after 1994. it is clear that when looking at two graph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03211009174 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66034877439 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1461936531 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.888888889 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252678886562 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10444137936 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746693556372 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192650381844 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324502039305 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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