The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in arts events in the same years.
The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people attending in arts events in the same years. Overall, as illustrated in the charts that the highest government's spending was in theater while the lowest was in virtual arts, and for the number of people participating in arts events, the highest expenditures was in music while the lowest spending was in virtual arts.
In pie charts of government expenditure, it was known that theater part of spending which used to be taking one-fourth of portion of total spending, increase significantly and became one-third of it. similar increases also happen in literature aspect, even though did not change significant as theater. while for music and virtual aspect experienced a reduction in government spending allocation. music aspect that used to take half of the amount of expenditures, in 2005 went down and became one-third of total expenditures. meanwhile visual art aspect did not change a lot in a decade.
For the people participating in art events diagram, it was known that people interest to attend music show or events are increase from 1995 that about 115.000 visitors and became 150.000 visitors in 2015. if it calculated, the changes for about 35.000 visitors. another art events that also increase on the amount of attenders are in theater and literature events. with the change of attenders more or less 20.000 and 5.000 visitors, maybe it's because of the increase on government spending in that two aspect. while for the visual art was experienced decrease of the amount of visitors for about 5.000 people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, third, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12639405204 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77203797317 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449814126394 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3824531569 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34345053792 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140584045802 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219881205202 0.0843802449381 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253623287523 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166625067581 0.0819641961636 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.