The charts below show part of the results of an extensive public survey on people s attitude to a range of issues

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The charts below show part of the results of an extensive public survey on people’s attitude to a range of issues.

The charts describe the results of an extensive public survey on people’s attitude to a range of issues.

Overall, people care more about education than transport, health. Moreover, the majority, people are willing to pay taxes.

In term of investment, using more money for education is given by the highest rate of those sampled with 70%. Meanwhile, people cited that do not invest in education only account for one – fifth. In other pie chart, only have 40% of respondents agreed with investing more money for health. The rate of people answered no and do not know that have the same percentage of 30%. In a survey about investing in public transport, there is only 10% of those asked want to invest in public transport while investing in education is more concerned by 85% of those sampled.

When it comes to taxes, people are willing to pay taxes for public services. Paying for taxes is quoted by the highest rate of those surveyed with over a half. In contrast, less than a half of those asked that do not agree with pay to taxes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...for health. The rate of people answered no and do not know that have the same perc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73369565217 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45550551316 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.516000866 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218414883234 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107730961961 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202377241279 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237867697751 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.291260013626 0.0819641961636 355% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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