The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008
The pie charts compare the distribution of UK residents from 23 to 65 years old in different careers in a town in the UK called Ashby and the whole country in 2008
Overall, there were not many significant differences in each category between the two charts. While personal service employed most people aged 23-65 in Ashby, a vast majority of citizens in the UK worked in offices
With regard to office work and personal service, these jobs’ employees accounted for over a third of total people between 23 to 65 in both Ashby and the UK, collectively. However, while the figure for personal service was higher than that of office work 3%, the opposition happened in the figure for the UK. Meanwhile, there was no much difference in those adults working in shops in these two areas
In contrast, the four remaining fields of two areas were witnessed with far more differences. Technical and professional work each made up less than 10% of the whole chart of Ashby, while the figures for the UK were 17% and 14% respectively. On the other hand, the total proportion of unemployed and construction work in the UK ( 20% ) was less than that of Ashby 1.5 times ( 30% )
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...figure for the UK. Meanwhile, there was no much difference in those adults working...
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...employed and construction work in the UK 20% was less than that of Ashby 1.5 tim...
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...yed and construction work in the UK 20% was less than that of Ashby 1.5 times 3...
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...% was less than that of Ashby 1.5 times 30%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third, while, in contrast, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73039215686 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62497597067 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563725490196 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4735290408 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.833333333 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 5.23603664747 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308094376863 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148453938745 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114377620801 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219643284862 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117956807688 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.