The pie graphs provide information on the amount of time which people depending on their age spend on various activities during their pass time (sending and receiving e-mails is excluded).
Overall, regardless of their age, it becomes evident that people use the internet these days for all sorts of reasons. However, more senior people prefer to manage their booking details through the internet quite more than younger folk who use the internet for entertainment purposes mainly.
Looking at both charts in more detail it is easy to see that 18 percent and 21 percent of young adults choose to play games and listen to music or watch movies online, while on the respective percentages for elder people are significantly lower (5 percent and 15 percent accordingly).
The figures for both age groups remain the relatively the same regarding researching, making purchases electronically and social networking at around 20 to 22, 12, and 21 to 24 percent respectively.
Finally, as shown by the pie graphs people around 60 to 70 years old spend the majority of their leisure time online booking (25%). This ratio for more junior people is considerably lower at around 5 percent.
- Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture We can learn as much as from books films and the Internet To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land What solution is better 84
- The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005 Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea and make comparisons where appropriate 78
- The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in Australia divided into three categories from 2001 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the relatively the'. Did you mean 'relatively the'?
Suggestion: relatively the
... The figures for both age groups remain the relatively the same regarding researching, making purc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, however, if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10309278351 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70158174914 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7470151307 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194974958078 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932775839128 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755488790137 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109210358689 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826138886585 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.