The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time (excluding email).
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the spend time on different kinds of online activities according to younger and older people. The general overview here is that in both groups, researching always surpasses almost the rest in the amount of time.
To specify, in the 18-26 age group, the biggest percentage is occupied by social networking with 24%, followed by accessing music/films and researching with 21% and 20% respectively. Although playing games accounts for only 18%, it is still greater than making purchases with 18%. In addition, making bookings is responsible for the smallest amount of 5%.
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The charts illustrate the spend time on different kinds of online activities
The charts illustrate the time (which was) spent on different kinds of online activities
researching always surpass almost the rest in the amount of time.
researching always surpasses almost the rest in the amount of time.
playing games account for only 18%
playing games accounts for only 18%
making bookings are responsible for the smallest amount of 5%.
making bookings is responsible for the smallest amount of 5%.
making bookings are the activities
making bookings is the activity
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