The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart below illustrate percentage of water used for different intention in six areas of the world.
Overall in Central Asia 88% of agricultural use, in South America 19 percent used for domestic needs, in Europe industrial use of water show 53 percent.
In North America agricultural use of water 39 percent and in South America 71 percent , North America use for industrial purposes 48 percent and domestic uses show 13 percent. In Africa 84 percent of water used for agricultural purposesThe charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six ares of the world .
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant and 9 percent for domestic aims. The South East Asia 7 percent of water used for domestic intention.
To sum up the low indicate to use of water for industrial aim in Africa 7 percent, Agricultural use in Europe 32 percent, domestic use in South East Asia and central Asia both the same indicate 7 percent
- The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95321637427 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77353063516 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7607373459 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366825402893 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241885449601 0.103423049105 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144652697679 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254066254074 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123294174379 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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