The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart below illustrate percentage of water used for different intention in six areas of the world.

Overall in Central Asia 88% of agricultural use, in South America 19 percent used for domestic needs, in Europe industrial use of water show 53 percent.

In North America agricultural use of water 39 percent and in South America 71 percent , North America use for industrial purposes 48 percent and domestic uses show 13 percent. In Africa 84 percent of water used for agricultural purposes, charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six ares of the world .

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant and 9 percent for domestic aims. The South East Asia 7 percent of water used for domestic intention.

To sum up the low write down to use of water for industrial aim in Africa 7 percent, Agricultural use in Europe 32 percent, domestic use in South East Asia and central Asia both the same show 7 percent

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89534883721 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72367715197 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447674418605 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2414493302 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37299047064 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24500596413 0.103423049105 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141570461504 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258434974415 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117705059329 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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