The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where is relevant.
The diagrams illustrate information about the proportion of water utilization in three variety sectors in six different regions in the world. Overall, there are two regions which water is spent the most in the agriculture and industry sectors, while the lowest share of water usage is used for domestic purposed.
Moving to the details, there are three regions which spent a large proportion of water in agriculture (Central asia, africa, and Southeast asia), it accounted for more than 80% of the total. following which is south africa, where water usage is up to 71% in agriculture. The remaining regions (north africa and europe) have a similar percentage (a third) of water spending on the sector.
europe is the region which observes a large share of water utilization in the industrial area. it is followed by north america with 48%. The other regions share the minority shares. Furthermore, there are two regions which provide the highest percentage of water on domestic purposed (south america and europe), 19% and 15% respectively. The remaining regions use water on the sector as a minority purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14364640884 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69531732987 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5842716998 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164213828637 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07127817648 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469590152052 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1251239962 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408049644442 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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