The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The table demonstrates that the various purposes in six regions in the worlds including North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia.
In general, the majority of areas have high demand in agriculture, especially, South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia with 71 percent, 84 percent, 88 percent, and 81 percent respectively.
Otherwise, in terms of North America and Europe, the rate of industrial utilization outweighs the agricultural use and domestic use. Specifically, the purpose of using water for industry accounted for 48 percent in North America and Europe had 53 percent.
According to what the chart above displays, the ratio of using water for domestic demand totally lower than the rest of using which can be seen in the Central Area and South East Asia. Both regions have 7 percent in utilizing water for family purposes meanwhile Africa, North America, Europe, and South America have 9 percent, 13 percent, 15 percent, and 19 percent correspondingly.
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world 73
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 56
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world 61
- Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36645962733 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80779693386 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.301845881 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183933752469 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113109390693 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665120447067 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121140712523 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644931079831 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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