The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The given pie charts provide a comparison of the amount of water utilized for industry, agriculture, and household in six areas across the globe.
From an overall perspective, it is obvious that Europe and North America have a tendency for consuming water in an industrial aspect while the four remaining continents use water for agriculture.
Taking a first look at the North America and Europe pie charts, it is evident that both zones apply half of the water source they have for industrial usage, which is 48 percent and 53 percent respectively. Subsequently, the other factors in these countries have the nearly same pattern, which is no more than 15 percent in domestic usage and higher than 30% in agriculture.
Moving to the four other continents, it is noticeable that the Central Area hosts the first rank for water usage in terms of irrigation, which is nearly 90 percent. Following that, agriculture in both Africa and South East Asia accounts for more than 80 percent of water sources while this number in South America is merely 71 percent. Next, the volume of water usage for the industry in South East Asia and South America have more than one-tenth while two others are under this proportion. Finally, three out of four continents spend under 10 percent on domestic usage except for South America.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93693693694 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59086944796 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.0258505474 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169086331374 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885357550473 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667751273685 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129981232719 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672797013382 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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