Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the midst of the hustle and bustle lifestyle, people don't have a penchant for spending their spare times for hobbies. There are several causes lead to this problems and a range of drawbacks affect to both individual and society. All of these will be scrutinized in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, it can be seemed that the main reason is come from the intensive development of technology. Everything in the modernized world become more convenient which lead to the sedentary lifestyle. Secondly, people nowadays are buried in work and study, which deter them from an active lifestyles. Thirdly, there are many virtual and digital activities that supplant the hands-on experience and pragmatic hobbies Instead of practicing hobbies like the past, people have a tendency for relaxing, playing computer game and watching TV. Moreover, school and parents in modern era organize less programs to help their children expose to practical activities. For instance, the current report in UK announced that more than 40% of teenagers consume most of their time for cooping up themselves in their own house than going out for a hobby.
This abominable lifestyle can destroy the social intrinsic of each individual and have the far-reaching effect to the society. To be clear, it degrade the meaningful of hobby contribute to people' physical and mental health. Moreover, people who have a sedentary lifestyle for a long time might become a wallflower and lessen their communicate skill. Doing hobby not only help people boost their physical and psychological health after a stressful time, but also create a chance for them to make new friends and stay out of the tedious life. Hobbies play a pivotal role to the society such as make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercussion caused by technology-driven era. Take a instance, some Western countries have a alarming rate about the people who have obesity and sense of solitary due to the lack of pragmatic hobby.
In conclusion, the existence of hobbies contribute a essential meaning to our life and lack of hobbies in daily life can cause the inactive lifestyles and many downfalls in each individual and society. That's the reason why each of us need to raise awareness about this problem and try to maintain this healthy activity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the hustle and bustle lifestyle, people dont have a penchant for spending their spar...
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Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...bbies. There are several causes lead to this problems and a range of drawbacks affec...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
... study, which deter them from an active lifestyles. Thirdly, there are many virtual and di...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun programs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...hool and parents in modern era organize less programs to help their children expose ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'degrades'?
Suggestion: degrades
... effect to the society. To be clear, it degrade the meaningful of hobby contribute to p...
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Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...h as make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercus...
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Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... as make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercuss...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
... make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercussion...
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Line 5, column 713, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n caused by technology-driven era. Take a instance, some Western countries have a...
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Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a instance, some Western countries have a alarming rate about the people who have...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on, the existence of hobbies contribute a essential meaning to our life and lack ...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...wnfalls in each individual and society. Thats the reason why each of us need to raise...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12073490814 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77170076712 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577427821522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1046793444 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.388888889 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20316084595 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573791704841 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038510675192 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123113031224 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00652010982047 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the hustle and bustle lifestyle, people dont have a penchant for spending their spar...
^^^^
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...bbies. There are several causes lead to this problems and a range of drawbacks affec...
^^^^
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
... study, which deter them from an active lifestyles. Thirdly, there are many virtual and di...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun programs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...hool and parents in modern era organize less programs to help their children expose ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'degrades'?
Suggestion: degrades
... effect to the society. To be clear, it degrade the meaningful of hobby contribute to p...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...h as make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercus...
^^
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... as make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercuss...
^^
Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
... make it healthier, keep it cohesive,.. or even mitigate the negative repercussion...
^^
Line 5, column 713, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n caused by technology-driven era. Take a instance, some Western countries have a...
^
Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a instance, some Western countries have a alarming rate about the people who have...
^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on, the existence of hobbies contribute a essential meaning to our life and lack ...
^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...wnfalls in each individual and society. Thats the reason why each of us need to raise...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12073490814 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77170076712 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577427821522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1046793444 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.388888889 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20316084595 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573791704841 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038510675192 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123113031224 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00652010982047 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.